Post by account_disabled on Mar 4, 2024 9:08:53 GMT
Heres what it might look like. A letter includes internal monologues also known as sea thoughts character questions and thoughts dialogue with pauses for reflection A simple letter looks like this longer paragraphs long sentences larger text blocks with fewer spaces A simple script looks like this It may seem boring but not always less seems important but its not thoughtful and curious A good stop during study sessions on right now to move the story forward rest lack of urgency Things seem to be going well for the character It may seem like you should never go slow but all of these elements are necessary to tell a good story. If your character just acts your reader will be bored and wont fully understand your characters development without the slow pace of internal monologues. Additionally some readers prefer slowpaced books. Examples of tempo in writing It is difficult to give an example of tempo on its own. Each book has a different pace but if you know what to look for you can visually see the differences. You can even visually see the difference between fast and slow writing and its in every book you read.
Here is an example of a fastpaced scene of the Portugal Mobile Number List story and the same scene recorded at a slower pace WRITING TEMP. EXAMPLE OF RAPID DEVELOPMENT Not knowing what to do Annabella looked at the salesman curiously. Is it good asked the darkhaired woman. He had to make a decision now. I will give you three pieces nothing else. The salesman laughed. Are not. Three items and Annabelle untied a bracelet hidden under a long sleeve this. Looking at him the woman took a step closer and held out her hand. I have to see that. So youre going to run away with him and leave me without him Annabelle snorted. Are not. Then there is no contract. This is gold I wont let you steal without it. Annabels chin turned towards the item the seller still held hostage. Where did you take it asked the woman. Does that make sense Annabel spat. Yeah if someone returns my tickets only to come and find this.
Annabella lowered her voice thoughtfully. It was not stolen. It would be better if it didnt happen. So do we have a contract The saleswoman reached out and took another piece of cloth. Bracelet and Coins. Okay Annabel softened. He dropped the bracelet into the womans leather hands and held the silk before handing over the coins he had originally offered. Of course it was more than he wanted to spend but it was necessary. Just not necessary. Without it he would not have spent the night inside the walls. He pursed his lips and pushed the bracelet roughly into the bag creaking as he tapped the coins and who knew what other goods were pressed into the leather. Thats nice of you maam said the salesman. Leave now so that others may come. Keep on Annabelle left her pocket lighter than it had been in days or even weeks. Will it last a few more days He could not say. But if he hadnt found this silk he wouldnt have been able to see this moment. Without seeing the womans black eyes he sighed and walked away. EXAMPLE OF LOW FLOW Not knowing what to do Annabella looked at the salesman curiously. His pockets were already light.
Here is an example of a fastpaced scene of the Portugal Mobile Number List story and the same scene recorded at a slower pace WRITING TEMP. EXAMPLE OF RAPID DEVELOPMENT Not knowing what to do Annabella looked at the salesman curiously. Is it good asked the darkhaired woman. He had to make a decision now. I will give you three pieces nothing else. The salesman laughed. Are not. Three items and Annabelle untied a bracelet hidden under a long sleeve this. Looking at him the woman took a step closer and held out her hand. I have to see that. So youre going to run away with him and leave me without him Annabelle snorted. Are not. Then there is no contract. This is gold I wont let you steal without it. Annabels chin turned towards the item the seller still held hostage. Where did you take it asked the woman. Does that make sense Annabel spat. Yeah if someone returns my tickets only to come and find this.
Annabella lowered her voice thoughtfully. It was not stolen. It would be better if it didnt happen. So do we have a contract The saleswoman reached out and took another piece of cloth. Bracelet and Coins. Okay Annabel softened. He dropped the bracelet into the womans leather hands and held the silk before handing over the coins he had originally offered. Of course it was more than he wanted to spend but it was necessary. Just not necessary. Without it he would not have spent the night inside the walls. He pursed his lips and pushed the bracelet roughly into the bag creaking as he tapped the coins and who knew what other goods were pressed into the leather. Thats nice of you maam said the salesman. Leave now so that others may come. Keep on Annabelle left her pocket lighter than it had been in days or even weeks. Will it last a few more days He could not say. But if he hadnt found this silk he wouldnt have been able to see this moment. Without seeing the womans black eyes he sighed and walked away. EXAMPLE OF LOW FLOW Not knowing what to do Annabella looked at the salesman curiously. His pockets were already light.